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Peace By Piece by ~wesleyJ:iconwesleyJ:





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Breaking my soul taking away from every

Righteous measure

As every letter I sent ya was either lost

Or unreadable



And I'm sorry but I'm bothered as these feelings

That I've harbored

I didn't know my first word would turn out

To be my last word



As it concurred to me and then allured my self

Sub-concise true

Sense of spice and spy says basically you better

Just check it out for yourself



As the requisition looms d day step forward

Dismay displayed

An relayed so that everybody hear it, I don't hear

Quit…I'm trained not to hear it



Break it out a little bit as I submit a piece or two

And peace by piece

Comes over you, my essence subdued as the sub-

Structure fails



Hoist them damn sail's an lets get of the rail cos

This e- brail that you sell,

Is like she sells with the sea shell's an then shells

Gonna hit you with copyright



An this copy might set alight an ignite like some

Kinda kryptonite

I'm in my crib tonight, taking a sip, look into

The light….



I start a fight between me, an intergalactic galaxy

Worrier, I'm sorrier

Than most despondent followers of deception I'm

Next in line



An that's fine, what a find… should I get a fine?

And why noT?/iNXx - © - 2008-09-09
©2008-2009 ~wesleyJ
:iconwesleyj:

Author's Comments

some call it poetry???

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:iconmacabreraven:
I can totally relate to this, awesome phrasing, and interesting rhyme scheme to boot! Awesome work

KEEP AT IT!~ :heart:

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I find myself today wishing for you.
I wish you were here,
I wish that you knew:
I wish that you were behind me, too:
To see me make a wish on the candles
And to make it come true,
Whisper in my ear:
"Happy Birthday, darling; I love you."
:iconjennythegenie:
Awesome work, i like the first 2 stanza's especially, they're really strong and easy to relate to. Awesome use of language too, def :+fav:

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if i started making sense the world would end

if your into dark poetry/prose check out this [link] which i am shamelessly promoting
:iconwesleyj:
thnx J...really glad you liked....*hugs:

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Again :resume: my opinion

Brought to you by :job:
:innocent:
To those who say I can't write hip-hop,
maybe mine is what rocks,
cos it comes straight from the top,
It's what your's is not,
It's not pop...:work:
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:iconwesleyj:
:party:

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Again :resume: my opinion

Brought to you by :job:
:innocent:
To those who say I can't write hip-hop,
maybe mine is what rocks,
cos it comes straight from the top,
It's what your's is not,
It's not pop...:work:
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:iconjennythegenie:
You're welcome. I think out of your recent deviations this is my favouritest :hug:

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if i started making sense the world would end

if your into dark poetry/prose check out this [link] which i am shamelessly promoting

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